Kwakhanya Khoza
Wow! I am at a loss for words. Bella Lore, you really know how to write a engaging story plot with such relatable characters, and that's what makes you one of my favourite authors! I loved the book, the way you you built up your plot and developed your characters is unbelievably beautiful! The reason I gave it four stars and not five is because of the spelling mistakes and improper use of grammar, but other than that, this book is definitely one of my favourites! I will definitely recommend this book to my friends and any other person that likes a good si-fi love story.
Patricia Young
I gave this one star because the plot was remarkably clever--twisted, reasonable, and surprising. However if anyone appoaching high school editing skills ever got within 6ft of this manuscript, they should be stripped of their diploma and go back to 8th grade English under Sister Mary Perpetua. Random words pop up within reasonable sentences, irrelevant punctuation marks cause repeated rereading before the author's intent becomes apparent and the mark is. changed or, more usually, discarded. Some sentences I couldn't even decipher and just had to ignore. Reading this reminded me of trying to crack the black walnuts in my yard, a tremendous output of energy for very little product. If you like a really good story wrapped in garbage, go for it. Otherwise skip this offering.
EJM
Fast paced, entertaining. Different from other books as there are no narratives, just plain stating facts. Grammer errors everywhere. It could be good with editing. Story line is good.