True Luna: Rejected By My Mate

Tessa Lilly

Jan 2023 · The White Wolf Series Book 1 · StarNovel (HK) Co., Limited

About this ebook

"I, Logan Carter, Alpha of the Crescent Moon Pack, reject you, Emma Parker of the Crescent Moon Pack."

I could feel my heart breaking. Leon was howling inside me, and I could feel his pain.

"I, Emma Parker of the Crescent Moon Pack, accept your rejection."

When Emma turns 18, she is surprised that her mate is the Alpha of her pack. But her elation was short-lived when he rejected her for a stronger she-wolf. That she-wolf hates Emma and wants to get rid of her. Emma’s problems don’t end there. She realizes that she possesses unusual powers, making her an exceptional wolf. As a result, she becomes a target for dangerous people who are determined to exploit her abilities. Emma is faced with the difficult decision of how to handle these challenges. Will her mate have second thoughts about rejecting her? Will he be able to protect her from the people who threaten her?

Ratings and reviews

I've just completed the series in a week. So this is a whole story review, not just book 1. Overall really enjoyed it, a typical wolf story but sometimes that's all you want. The relationship between Emma & her brother is a bit much though, I understand he loves her but it's borderline insest, she doesn't need to live sat on his lap with him kissing her head constantly. Things are repeated alot, something is said then a few short paragraphs later it's basically said again -no need. Lots of typos and wrong words caused by rushing to get the books out in such a short time frame. Time frames within the story where annoying at times. e.g cabin 10min from packhouse, hunter sent away for shower, says he will be back in 15min. Ended with an awful lot of mates being formed within the inner circle, basically cousins & already relations. Widen the circle! Is she Sophie or Sophia? Choose one, it's not the same name. Fia & lex don't need to live in each other's arms again they're twins not lovers.

It's not a bad book but it kind of felt like I was reading about characters who were teens playing dress up. I found the characters a bit weak. The alpha is a bit of a wet noodle who stomps around yelling "she's mine!" every 2 seconds and acts like a grumpy teen who can't control his temper. The female lead is supposed to be so strong and yet she wallows in self pity most of the time and let's people walk all over her and also has a brother who is borderline creepy with her. I think the plot was good though and this is probably an amazing book for young adults but as a mature reader I found it lacked depth and strength of character.

This whole book is painful to read. The misspelling, poor grammar, a weak plot and horrible paragraph structure, missing letters in a word, over use of "love", "baby", "little one". Oh and any situation of frustration or anger "he ran his hand through his hair". Reusing sentences or phrases. The characters are one dimensional.The brotherly "love" is creepy. An older brother does not treat his younger sister like that. The whole "pick me" fantasy is cringey. Do they not employ editors anymore? This is clearly a 7th graders writing of a "True Blood/Twilight" fanfic. At most an eleventh grader who's been failing at English. There's no way an adult wrote this. Best thing I can say is it's a creative premise, but it feels like it's been stolen.