Shashi Vishwakarma
it was really nice.. every poem , every sentence, and even every line has its own deep meaning..it expresses a lot ..from being loved to longing for change
Alex Pablo
This poem was speaking to me. This is how I felt in my darken days. My so called friends just disappeared. It was like they weren't ever there. Same are gone and the other's don't know me.
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goutam dutta
The thoughts expressed here are nuggets of gold. What is perhaps required for the poet to do is to polish it a little bit more and take off the unwanted and then weave the nuggets in a chain. The poet makes an attempt to probably say too much at one go. A bit of pruning and rephrasing would, I feel, do wonders.
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