Mike Wooden
Honestly, there are a lot of mistakes about who's talking and such. Sometimes, sentences are jumbled, and honestly, the way power levels are described in this volume are atrocious aside from that 👌. It's still another good story from fuse sensei it would be worth 5 stars if certain things just meshed better in the grand scheme of things that got changed from the web novel. Sadly, one of the things i considered an important part of this book just didn't fit together, but others might not even notice, so take that with a grain of salt if you will.
Dayton White
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The story is great. My biggest complaint is the translation and subsequent edits. They keep flipping between "he" and "she" when referring to the same character. it's distracting and makes it hard to follow sometimes. I had to go back and reread some passages several times to make sure I understood it right. Get it together Yen Press! If you need an editor for the English versions, I happily volunteer!