Ash Night the DragonBorne
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A predictable read but enjoyable. I admire Harper's tenacity and resistance to being taken from our world and thrust into a fantasy realm to help a desperate prince. If I were her, I would do what it took to leave. I'm not staying in a place to help someone i don't know. I liked Harper's chemistry with Grey a lot more in the beginning and throughout the book than her and Rhen. I get that it's all for the sake of breaking the curse and he's desperate since it's the final season, but still. I found him to be a bit overbearing and temperamental that even I wouldn't be able to stand him. I'm glad it's not insta-lovey between Grey and Harper and it builds to a good friendship, but I like the idea of them ending up together but we'll see. The beginning was good, the middle was better but by the last 20% I was already eager to be done with the book. The pacing was all over the place; I had to set the audiobook aside for a few days.I was waiting for it to end but my god was there a lot crammed in. Then we have Rhen's chapters near the end being one singular word or three. I dont need separate chapters to understand what's going on in his monster brain. I got the message by Chapter 44 that he's a dragon-beast thing and has no recollection of his fellow man. It was predictable that Harper was going to use him as a weapon against Karis's army. I mean hello? Why wouldn't she? It's the obvious choice. You cant beat a dragon if you dont know where to hit and when it's coming at you. And Karis dropping that secret heir bomb? ššoh puhlease! I was shouting at the book for someone to realize it was Grey. The man is loyal to the throne and was conveniently sworn into servitude to Rhen? Could the answer BE anymore obvious? At the 11th hour, I needed Grey or someone to grab Lilith by the neck and take her to the other side to kill her. I dont get why they hadn't done that before. Could be because if she dies on our end, her magic goes with her and if the curse isn't lifted in time then woe is Rhen blah blah. Anyway, I'm just glad Grey got her and killed her. As to where he is, sounds like he ended up in another part of Emberfall. Curious about how the rest of this will develop now that Jake and Noah are involved but I had an ok time with this first book.
Lenore Kosinski
4.5 stars ā This was the kind of book that gave me tummy tingles from nerves and anxiety and had me growling in frustration and racing to the bathroom yelling āDammit, I have to pee!ā to my husband because my bladder interrupted my reading time. I think that speaks for itself. š I loved Harper. She was fierce, bold, if somewhat impulsive and reckless. I didnāt mind that she made those missteps, because *I* would make those missteps when presented with a foreign world with completely different rules of living. I think, in the end, that Rhen (and Grey) really appreciated the unique and unfiltered perspective she brought, because she was unencumbered by traditions. I found the dichotomy of being so fierce with her soft heart and lack of stomach for violence to be intriguing. She is faced with this crazy situation, and she is threatened, and sometimes sheās jumping in headfirst attacking, and other times she cannot watch someone with ill intent be killed. It wasā¦odd. It both worked and didnāt work for me. I think if she hadnāt been so attacking at times, I would have understood it more. And I did understand it to an extent, justā¦something. I did love how we got to see a strong disabled character, who had to deal with those limitations, but it was just a small part of her story, it wasnāt her whole story. Basically it was a perfect diversity story. Rhen was hard to love at first. I felt for his despair and pain, but I also boggled at his inability to see the truth of the entire situation. That he hadnāt even considered the logistics of finding someone to love, it was all just a means to an end. He was an interesting character in that way, because it was hard to like all of him at the beginning. But I think that made his growth and transformation that much more satisfying. It made me connect with him when he started to fall for Harper. It was so hard to see him develop hope only for Lilith to come in and destroy it. Sometimes I wanted him to defeat that better, to give people a bit more credit, to grow just that teensy bit more. And then thereās Grey. I loved him as a character, and I loved how he provided a counterbalance to Rhen. He was fiercely loyal, and incredibly frightening in his abilities. I definitely want to know more about him. I loved the almost friendship he had with Rhen, and I loved the friendship that he formed with Harper, and how he supported her. The romance had amazing parts, and had lacking parts. I loved the way they slowly got to know one another, and trust one another, and I appreciated that so much. And I definitely felt some chemistry between them. But at the same time, I was never quite certain if it was supposed to be a love triangle, or if I was misreading things. I wish it had been slightly more clear one way or the other. The ambiguity didnāt work for me. I, personally, am not a love triangle fan, but I could have tolerated it if Iād known if it was present. I know that sounds weird, but the middle ground was just unsatisfying. And even setting aside the weird love triangle that was or wasnāt, the ending with Harper and Rhen wasnāt entirely satisfying for me. Iām not sure if weāll get more in the next book, but I donāt think so. So I was a bit bummed. I wanted that literary romance ending where Iām gushing, you know? The secondary characters were fantastic. I loved the relationships that Harper developed with Freya and Zo ā they made me so happy. Iām conflicted about her brother, Jake, and Noah. I didnāt really like how that turned outā¦but not sure if that will get more resolution in future books. So yeahā¦I had a lot of semi-critical things to say, but even despite all that, I was just so wrapped up and enjoying myself that I still canāt help but rate this high. Donāt try to figure me out,
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Mary Thiel
This book was very intriguing going into it, and I'm very happy with how the author displayed representation throughout the story. The writing was very fluid and easy to get into, while presenting lovable characters along the way! Every character had a clear purpose/standing throughout the book, and everything made sense, (ie. no plot holes, unexplained behaviors, motives ect.) Which is a very big pet peeve of mine. I loved the story and can't wait for the next book!
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