Sarah Cheeseman
A very short story indeed; too short to be able to give much of a review. This is supposed to be the history of how the Mer came to be, but that part is so glossed over as to be almost non-existent. Did the author not develop this part of the story? Then why offer it? The Mer exist, move on but, if you want to tell their history than do so. As for introducing a series in the Mer, it doesn't really do that either.
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Chicken Nugget
Haven't read yet, looked at some reviews saying its short, checked the pages. 18 PAGES? THAT'S TOO LITTLE. I'll edit my review when I finish it.
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