Chenyu Jin (Amend)
It aligns well with the world view and technology displayed in 'Children of time'. I am especially fascinated by the understanding along the discrepancy between civilization arisen from tales and science and how view varies in their perspectives.The end remarks a great journey in healing and finding a new identity, though the last few lines about his choice and will is a bit cliche. Still, I consider this as a joyful read after finishing children of time.
Victor Jetten
nice short story, worth while reading. The misunderstanding between the characters is very credible and entertaining, in the face of a larger threat that is not evil, but very scary. This would make an entertaining movie!
YulJ
Shares themes with The Expert System's series and The Doors Of Eden. The antagonist's origin story and indeed, its ultimate goal, is a glaring omission which hints (fingers crossed) at a follow up. Perhaps a sufficiently technologically advanced earth's attempt to remotely purge a failed colonisation attempt, or the latest threat against earth, hinted at throughout the story, now continuing its work by going after earth's outposts…